You Scream I Scream we all scream for ice-cream!!!!!!!!! get em while their fresh but not to get it on your flesh you lick the yummy ice-cream you say yummy in my tummy you dropped your ice-cream just get another cream! plus you get a screamy dreamy ice-cream! just taste the yummy thing you could put that in your mouth but you cant have better growth with that!!! you put some fruits on the top like that cherry on that other top! you like to sing why dont you swing? lets all go to the ice-cream shop!
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Wednesday, April 8, 2020
Poem About Ice-cream!!!
You Scream I Scream we all scream for ice-cream!!!!!!!!! get em while their fresh but not to get it on your flesh you lick the yummy ice-cream you say yummy in my tummy you dropped your ice-cream just get another cream! plus you get a screamy dreamy ice-cream! just taste the yummy thing you could put that in your mouth but you cant have better growth with that!!! you put some fruits on the top like that cherry on that other top! you like to sing why dont you swing? lets all go to the ice-cream shop!
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Hi Calystah,
ReplyDeleteGreat poetry, you have found lots of rhyming words. What flavour would you choose at an ice cream shop?
Mrs Roach
neopolitan i love the strawberry mixed with vanilla and chocolate
DeleteHi Calystah,
ReplyDeleteWhat a cool poem, you have made me want some of your ice cream. I love your first line you scream, I scream for ice cream - do you like writing poems?
Miss Gill.
yes its kinda fun doing it you learn new words and you can learn how to write an word
ReplyDeleteI don't get it
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