Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Tuesday, April 7, 2020
if someone lived in the moon
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Dear Calystahshine
ReplyDeleteGreat story! I like the way you used your general knowledge of the moon and used it in your story.
I think gravity would help when dancing on the moon.
If you could decide on the flavour of your alien and martian food what would it be?
hmmmm... it would be gooey ooey slimey galaxy oreos! cuz i love oreos my favorite is red velvet
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