Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Tuesday, April 7, 2020
Jelly
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Hi Calystah
ReplyDeleteThis jelly sounds great. I have never though to add lollies to jelly but that sounds yummy.
What other things have you added to jelly?
Hi Calystah,
ReplyDeleteRaspberry is my favourite jelly flavour but I have never had it with gummy bears in it. I like how you added your feelings into the story. Remember to add full stops so we know where to take a breath. Can't wait to see what you make next.
Mrs Roach