Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Wednesday, April 8, 2020
Poem About Ice-cream!!!
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Hi Calystah,
ReplyDeleteGreat poetry, you have found lots of rhyming words. What flavour would you choose at an ice cream shop?
Mrs Roach
neopolitan i love the strawberry mixed with vanilla and chocolate
DeleteHi Calystah,
ReplyDeleteWhat a cool poem, you have made me want some of your ice cream. I love your first line you scream, I scream for ice cream - do you like writing poems?
Miss Gill.
yes its kinda fun doing it you learn new words and you can learn how to write an word
ReplyDeleteI don't get it
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